Embuck's sprite attempts
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Re: Embuck's sprite attempts
Her right bicep looks a bit thin to me... it currently appears smaller than the forearm. I'm not sure this is a real problem though.
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Re: Embuck's sprite attempts
I don't think it's too much of a problem; the leather guard would tend to bulk up her forearm. I'd guess that sort of thing is thick leather, with a quilted padding behind it. Also, she's an elf; they tend to have deceptively slender limbs. Leads to a lot of underestimation.
Do you see anything else? I can't think of another advancement sprite, so I might actually animate the two hooded ones next... Or I'll move forward with the actual programming...
Do you see anything else? I can't think of another advancement sprite, so I might actually animate the two hooded ones next... Or I'll move forward with the actual programming...
Re: Embuck's sprite attempts
Just some small things. Her right shoulder is less covered by the cloak than her left; I think it would look better if you add a few pixels on her right soulder and remove a bit from the left one. Her leather guards would look more like leather if you make them brown.
Re: Embuck's sprite attempts
How's the cloak now?
Any suggestions for advancements, or shall I just use AMLAs?
While cows come in many colors, I'll agree that Brown is more common for commercial leather. The guards are now browner.Any suggestions for advancements, or shall I just use AMLAs?
Re: Embuck's sprite attempts
Cloak and guards are better now imo.
I don't have any suggestions about another advancement.
I don't have any suggestions about another advancement.