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How does this look?
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much better, but now the arm is too thin. the upper arm (closest to the body) should be thicker. change that, and i will say you are done.
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Here you go.
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Don't forget the accents =)
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Woodwizzle wrote:Don't forget the accents =)
accents?

anyway, yes, that looks much better. what would this be the advancement of, shock trooper?
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i see a problem, if this is the advancement of shock trooper- they look nothing alike.

i suggest changing the colors on the new image to mimick those of the shock trooper.
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turin wrote: accents?
Look at the first page of this thread and you'll see a version with gold accents.
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Post by Jetrel »

yeah - Xactly what I wuz saying - maybe not enough, but it looks waaay better now.
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OK, here are three options: Original steel, Shocktrooper Grey, and Shocktrooper Accented.
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Post by fmunoz »

mm he still look too much like an orc. (same helmet, same boots) try using some parts from the shoocktrooper... to make him more unorcish....
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Shocktrooper Accented has my vote. I also agree with fmunoz... it needs to be a lil' more shock trooperish
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Post by Sangel »

Unfortunately, I can't steal the boots from the shocktrooper - they simply don't work with this stance. I've modified them a little, though, and stolen the helmet. How does this feel?
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Post by turin »

i would advise changing the stance of the shield so that it was diagonal, like that of the shock trooper. i just compared the two, and after that, i think this will look like an acceptable upgrade.

one thing- this is using a warhammer. the heavy infantry is using one, but its upgrade, the shock trooper, uses a mace. do we really want it going warhammer->mace->warhammer?
i think you should change the weapon on the advancement to a mace, like the shock trooper.
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Post by Sangel »

OK, I've modified the shield. I get what you mean about the warhammer -> Flail -> Warhammer transition, but I'm not so certain it's a problem. A hammer just seems so suitable for this guy.
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true. maybe the shock trooper (that name is going to be changed, right?) should also have a warhammer. that would increase consistency, among other things.
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