My new wose for my campaign...
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My new wose for my campaign...
I'm trying to make some units for my campaign: The Revenge of the Wose. And currently I'm trying to make a "Wose" hero for the main storyline. I've tried to create a new one (copy and pasting) but I wonder if anyone can help me make it look more unique *or* u can just said it's ok and I'll be happy
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A question, why for god's sake does a tree need a wooden shield and a club? Like it didn't have enough wood or branches already
It looks bloody ridiculous, and even with WINR rule I can't imagine it, it's not sane enough.
If you really need a 'hero' wose, make the tree look older, or otherwise unique. Copypasting weapons and (god forbid) armor won't do
It looks bloody ridiculous, and even with WINR rule I can't imagine it, it's not sane enough.
If you really need a 'hero' wose, make the tree look older, or otherwise unique. Copypasting weapons and (god forbid) armor won't do
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Too much green, hes supposed to have mold on him, not be MADE of mold.<ShadowPaladin> wrote:I'll try my best. I've just learnt basic GIMP so it would take a long time. Thanks for the idea though.
EDIT: Wow, i made it really quick - and choppy at the same time
Anyway, i think to make him unique, you must create a unique look for him that isn't just color. Im suggesting thorns, adding flowers, adding different kinds of fruit, adding a weapon (no armor though, it wouldnt suit).
Keep it going though, you dont have to instantly get these, practice other things if these are too hard; let them be long term goals.
Gj though.
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The leaves definitely need to be more silver, that would be a big improvement.<ShadowPaladin> wrote:Just fixed it again. And again I screwed up the color, but I gave him a thorny elbow and some mold, gave him darker color too. Is this better?
You did a good job on the mold though
The thorn elbow is awesome; exactly the type of thing i was thinking of.
This is looking awesome now.
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Yayaya, my next fix. Change the "beard" color back to normal. Add the eye of "holyness" (<-is that's a word, anyone?). Add a gem to the forehead. The sharp claw's hard for me too make, since I can't do it unless i make it longer which will make it look kinda strange. I'm currently thinking of giving it a BIG club (a bigger version of the troll's). If you have any other idea for weapon. Plz tell me
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Dont make them longer, just make the claws pointier; i.e. just add a few pixels to the end to give them a sharp look. I dont think you should do the club though. I also don't like the gem, it also doesnt suit a wose (they're forest creatures, why would they have rubies?)<ShadowPaladin> wrote:Yayaya, my next fix. Change the "beard" color back to normal. Add the eye of "holyness" (<-is that's a word, anyone?). Add a gem to the forehead. The sharp claw's hard for me too make, since I can't do it unless i make it longer which will make it look kinda strange. I'm currently thinking of giving it a BIG club (a bigger version of the troll's). If you have any other idea for weapon. Plz tell me
i think you should make you wose have one clenched hand (a fist) and one clawed hand, therefore he would have two attacks. Instead of a 22-2 (impact) wose, it would be a 16-3 (blade) and 18-2 (impact) wose, which among other things (like AWESOMENESS,) would make him versatile. I also like the "silver" leaves idea, but that just may be my personal preference.
btw, HOLYNESS is not a word, but HOLINESS is.
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Here's my new update, pull out the gem, give him a clench fist. Fix a few eyes and fruits problems. But about the silver leaves idea, can anyone do it (on a regular Wose) and show it to me... cause I don't really know how to make silver color in GIMP
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I tried my best at it, but i think i failed at the hand and the beard:
-he's still a little green-tinted
-the beard, in particular, i screwed up
-I used different shades of gray to create the silver look
-i like this sprite.
-changed the eye colour to light/lime green - you can change it back if you'd like
-he needs more unique characteristics
Good job.
-he's still a little green-tinted
-the beard, in particular, i screwed up
-I used different shades of gray to create the silver look
-i like this sprite.
-changed the eye colour to light/lime green - you can change it back if you'd like
-he needs more unique characteristics
Good job.
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- A little dark for silver though.
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