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Re: My images ;)
First image: right hand weapon seems to end strangely. Hair is good
Warriors: in game more contrast between advance paths would be preferable
Machine looks interesting.
Warriors: in game more contrast between advance paths would be preferable
Machine looks interesting.
- Elvish_King
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Good images but the left side of the shields from the akladians seems to be cut off.
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The latest sprites for the most part are really solid, awesome work. The last 3 are suffering from bodies that look tubular, they need more shape to the mid sections.
(The Akladians are super sweet )
(The Akladians are super sweet )
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Jesteś polakiem, pisz po polsku.:
I like the machine. Did you draw it yourself?
I commented the Akladian. The contours are missing and - like Elvish_King said - the shields seem cut.
This golden warrior is cool. But his helmet has got different shadows :/ You can see it on the second unit,
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Looks good
My suggestions:
1) the hair is too big
2) his axe is a little illegible. Maybe re-drawing it and making it brighter would solve this issue.
My suggestions:
1) the hair is too big
2) his axe is a little illegible. Maybe re-drawing it and making it brighter would solve this issue.
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Nice work again, sadly all of your older pictures have gone away Perhaps it's best to use the built-in uploader instead of a 3rd party service.
- Midnight_Carnival
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Your sprites are beautiful, you have a unique (amime themed?) style.
I love all of them (that I can see) but I think your warrior guy with the beard and sword could do with a little more shading or detail on his armor perhaps, I find it hard to see what's going on there.
Thanks, keep drawing.
I love all of them (that I can see) but I think your warrior guy with the beard and sword could do with a little more shading or detail on his armor perhaps, I find it hard to see what's going on there.
Thanks, keep drawing.
...apparenly we can't go with it or something.
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hey, where is all your beautiful work?
from what i have seen in the last posts, i really would like to see your other stuff
from what i have seen in the last posts, i really would like to see your other stuff
The best bet is your own, good Taste.
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- Midnight_Carnival
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The top guy is my favorite although I don't know exactly why.
The combination of long polearm and small shield on the others looks ok but doesn't make much sense or make sense but looks a bit funny, I can't work out which in my present state. I also think that while I like the way the units look in different team colours, you might try only posting them once in team colour perhaps?
I think you are drawing well and you have grown from doing (perhaps a little over the top) very original, very unique units to drawing very original units which could easily be part of a regular army. You've been making graphics for a while haven't you?
The combination of long polearm and small shield on the others looks ok but doesn't make much sense or make sense but looks a bit funny, I can't work out which in my present state. I also think that while I like the way the units look in different team colours, you might try only posting them once in team colour perhaps?
I think you are drawing well and you have grown from doing (perhaps a little over the top) very original, very unique units to drawing very original units which could easily be part of a regular army. You've been making graphics for a while haven't you?
...apparenly we can't go with it or something.
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