The Gnats Franken Dungeon
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- Midnight_Carnival
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Ok, your female paladin is beautiful, I want to marry her. Your ruler and healer are good, the ruler particularly has a lot of character. The angel girl I love too, you draw people who look like people, not just generic character classes.
regarding your sprites, the Orcish Emperor is very good.
I just have a few issues with your dragon portrait. It is well composed and original, I get a sense of both the wyvern and it's rider's character. However it doesn't look like pixel art. It looks like you used a vector drawing program and franked it onto something. I mean if you did all your portraits in the plastic looking vector style it would be ok, I guess, bu as it is it looks jarring and discordant.
This would be a great portrait apart from the issue I raised, please re draw it or fix it some time.
regarding your sprites, the Orcish Emperor is very good.
I just have a few issues with your dragon portrait. It is well composed and original, I get a sense of both the wyvern and it's rider's character. However it doesn't look like pixel art. It looks like you used a vector drawing program and franked it onto something. I mean if you did all your portraits in the plastic looking vector style it would be ok, I guess, bu as it is it looks jarring and discordant.
This would be a great portrait apart from the issue I raised, please re draw it or fix it some time.
...apparenly we can't go with it or something.
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Hi Midnight carnival, I really appreciate your comments! I am glad you like the portraits! Just to clarify though none of the artwork in this thread is completely mine. For example the paladin is almost a replica of the paladin in wesnoth except it now has the face of the thief.Midnight_Carnival wrote:Ok, your female paladin is beautiful, I want to marry her. Your ruler and healer are good, the ruler particularly has a lot of character. The angel girl I love too, you draw people who look like people, not just generic character classes.
regarding your sprites, the Orcish Emperor is very good.
I just have a few issues with your dragon portrait. It is well composed and original, I get a sense of both the wyvern and it's rider's character. However it doesn't look like pixel art. It looks like you used a vector drawing program and franked it onto something. I mean if you did all your portraits in the plastic looking vector style it would be ok, I guess, bu as it is it looks jarring and discordant.
This would be a great portrait apart from the issue I raised, please re draw it or fix it some time.
As for the drago when I get a chance I will see if I can improve it! Thank you!
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Ok, so here is another franken-portrait:
I have stolen parts from a druid's hair and the human mages cloak. I personally am not satisfied with it but i thought i would post it and see what you think!
Old cloaked elvish bowman
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Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon.
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Here is another version of that portrait, i think it is slightly improved:
Okay, here is the final version of the Infiltrator with a sword also:
(i also have variations of this portrait with and without the hood,mask,sword... if anyone wants them i will post them)
Comments are appreciated!
Old cloaked elf no-sword
Old cloaked elf no-armour
Comments are appreciated!
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- ForestDragon
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Neat! btw, you can post all versions in a zip (or any other archive) file for those who are interestedThe_Gnat wrote:Here is another version of that portrait, i think it is slightly improved:
Okay, here is the final version of the Infiltrator with a sword also:
(i also have variations of this portrait with and without the hood,mask,sword... if anyone wants them i will post them)
Comments are appreciated!
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Here is the full zip including an xcf with all the layers (which runs in gimp)
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Unfortunately I don't think the orientation of the torso and the wings match. The wings seem to be full frontal, but the torso is twisted a bit; the left wing (viewer's pov) should point a bit towards the viewer, the right wing in the other direction. Maybe the wings need to be slanted a bit? Also the lowest point of the wings' V-shape seems to be a bit off-center to the right?The_Gnat wrote:Bag made a pretty good celestial messenger picture and i put the female white mage on his wings
Regarding the combat elvish shyde: I was wondering what those red things were, until I got into the perfect position in front of my monitor and saw the wings; maybe you could make them visible a bit better?
Keep up the good work!
I have a cunning plan.
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Thanks for the comments when I get time I will try to fix that!nuorc wrote:Unfortunately I don't think the orientation of the torso and the wings match. The wings seem to be full frontal, but the torso is twisted a bit; the left wing (viewer's pov) should point a bit towards the viewer, the right wing in the other direction. Maybe the wings need to be slanted a bit? Also the lowest point of the wings' V-shape seems to be a bit off-center to the right?The_Gnat wrote:Bag made a pretty good celestial messenger picture and i put the female white mage on his wings
Regarding the combat elvish shyde: I was wondering what those red things were, until I got into the perfect position in front of my monitor and saw the wings; maybe you could make them visible a bit better?
Keep up the good work!
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
For the Reign of the Lords addon i made this portrait of the death knight with a sword:
And here is a hellstorm rider:
And here is the doom warden:
And here is the eternal lich and an archive with its animations:
Also i have attached an archive, i have finally added ore animations to the elvish deadeye
And here is a hellstorm rider:
And here is the doom warden:
And here is the eternal lich and an archive with its animations:
Also i have attached an archive, i have finally added ore animations to the elvish deadeye
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon.
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
And also i have finally added animations to the elvish deadeye:
Also looking through my thread i did not see the cave runner sprite i had made so here it is:
Forest Dragon helped with a few of the animations:
Also it seems i never uploaded a picture of the flamecaster:
Also looking through my thread i did not see the cave runner sprite i had made so here it is:
Forest Dragon helped with a few of the animations:
Also it seems i never uploaded a picture of the flamecaster:
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon.
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
And here is the archive of the flamecasters animations. The limit of attachments per post is five so i had to make a new post.
It is fairly large because it has standing and moving and attacking animations with its sword flaming, here is a gif showing standing flame animation:
It is fairly large because it has standing and moving and attacking animations with its sword flaming, here is a gif showing standing flame animation:
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- WTrawi
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
I think the fire animation could be a bit better. Why don't you try this one?
Not very active on the forum anymore, but I still read it, and I also still play Wesnoth and draw a bit.
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
WTrawi wrote:I think the fire animation could be a bit better. Why don't you try this one?
Thanks for the link i will have a look.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Its been a while since i have drawn anything but here is a quick franken-icon i just made. I am not entirely satisfied and make work on it a little harder later, but for now it works well enough.
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- Midnight_Carnival
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Your undead are beautiful, however I can't tell what is going on with the doom warden.
Perhaps animation would clear it up, I can make out the skull, that is about all.
Perhaps animation would clear it up, I can make out the skull, that is about all.
...apparenly we can't go with it or something.